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Live-Tweet Transcript from June 4, 2011, presentation - "The Editor/Agent Pitch Session: How to Make it a Success!"

Kelly Henkins, who writes as Angela DrakeOzarks Romance Authors, a multi-genre, non-profit group for writers (founded in 1987), met Saturday, June 4, 2011, at The Library Station on North Kansas Expressway in Springfield, Missouri. The June presentation was by member Kelly Henkins, who writes as Angela Drake.

Her topic was perfect as we prepare for one-on-one pitch sessions at our July 23 annual conference, with Avalon Books Editor Lia Brown and Literary Agent Louise Fury of The L. Perkins Agency -- "The Editor/ Agent Pitch Session: How to Make it a Success!"

We live-tweeted during the meeting until Twitter gave us a message that we had exceeded the number of posts allowed. Follow us on Twitter at @OzarksRomance!

Here is the entire transcript of the live-tweet:

June 4, 2011 -- 1:10 p.m. CT

Kelly Henkins writes as Angela Drake. Her site is http://angeladrake.blogspot.com/ She is speaking to Ozarks Romance Authors today http://ow.ly/53hr3 Topic: How to have a successful pitch session with editor or agent http://ow.ly/53hr3

Register for our 7/23/11 conference for 2 pitch opportunities #sgf #mo #amwriting http://ow.ly/4lZmp

Avalon Editor Lia Brown and Lit Agent Louise Fury will take pitches at our 7/23 conf http://ow.ly/4lZmp

Everything is a "what if" that moves the story forward.

Same with your writing career.

Must continue to ask "what if" to move your writing career forward.

Pitching is one of those "what if's."

When will you have another chance to pitch your book to an editor or agent?

What if you don't pitch at our conference 7/23/11?

When will you have another chance to pitch? Need to take advantage of this opportunity.

Kelly's info on pitching was a result of a last-minute pitch opp with an editor 10 years ago.

She gave her 1st, 2nd, and 3rd choices for pitching at the conference.

Got her conf packet and found out she was able to pitch to 2 that day.

Advice on having a great pitch?

Don't be nervous.

Kelly/Angela walked out of her first pitch session EVER with a request for full manuscript.

Agents/Editors told Kelly they are amazed by # of writers who have no idea what to do/say in pitch session.

Pitch session is like a job interview. Prepare for this!

You lose out if you don't target right editor/agent when pitching.

Sure, you'll be nervous. But be as prepared as possible.

Editors/agents are people, just like you. They've been on job interviews, been nervous, too.

Prepare well. Do your best. You are asking them to trust you to tell great story, meet deadlines.

They may ask you to make changes you don't totally agree with.

Separate yourself from the story and realize they know more than you.

You think your story is perfect? Pitch it. Editor/agent will ask questions, offer suggestions.

If editor/agent offers advice, don't be offended. Give it some thought. Will it work?

Editor/Agent knows what the book needs, often without reading it.

How do you prepare for those all-important 5 or 10 minutes in pitch?

Learn about the company. Dress appropriately. Just like a job interview.

You want this editor. Don't be mousy, mumble, etc. Be confident!

No such thing as a textbook pitch session/interview.

No editor/agent is the same. All are looking for certain things.

10 steps to making your pitch session go well...

1. Have the book finished.

What if the editor/agent asks for the full manuscript and you haven't finished?

Will you have time to finish it, polish, go over it several times, make it perfect?

All the time spent scurrying to finish book, editor/agent is waiting, accepting other offers, still looking.

She'll pick up the authors who are finishing the work and getting it to her.

Don't miss out on your opportunity because you don't have it ready to go.

Usually ask for first 3 chapters and synopsis.

Even if you get first 3 chapters and synopsis into the mail, don't let life grind to halt to finish book.

Must be in proper format and FLAWLESS.

You can't give a confident pitch if you don't even know what's going to happen in your story.

1 of first ? asked in pitch session is "Is this book finished?"

You need to know your story inside and out. If you pitch 1 story but change it, your pitch might be invalid.

If editor/agent wants to see story you pitched, but you changed it so much that it isn't the same...

... might not be interested since it's so different.

Basically, the blurb on back of book is your pitch.

Just like a reader deciding if she wants to spend $ to buy your book,

... editor/agent looks at pitch to see if she wants to take chance on you as writer.

Register for our 7/23/11 conference for 2 pitch opportunities #sgf #mo #amwriting http://ow.ly/4lZmp Avalon Editor Lia Brown and Lit Agent Louise Fury will take pitches at our 7/23 conf http://ow.ly/4lZmp

10 steps to making your pitch session go well...

2. Know your qualifications.

Do you need to be an expert? Expert on subjects mentioned in your book?

No, you don't have to be an expert. But know the topic well enough.

Maybe you worked at a summer job related to the heroine's career.

Maybe you've studied it well, researched well, have access to experts.

If non-fiction, being an expert is sometimes required.

Other qualifications? Holding position in writers' group, contest winner, degree in whatever...

...speaking at confererence or workshops, mentor other writers, critique group.

Anything that lends credibility and lets editor/agent know you are serious about writing career.

If writing non-fiction, need to show knowledge. Example?

Writing about hiking in national forest, and you do this as a hobby.

The more you pad your writer's resume with credentials, the better.

Take a college course on the topic you're writing about. Interview people.

Need to know about guns? Take a handgun course.

10 steps to making your pitch session go well...

3. Know the house.

Would you walk into a job interview knowing nothing about the company or job? No!

Learn about the publishing house. Who is the acquisitions editor?

It's not the senior editor. It's the underdogs.

Do they publish what you write?

Do you write steampunk but you're pitching to house that wants contemporary?

What about word count? What are they looking for?

Know your genre, the publishing house, and what they are looking for.

How many titles do they release in a month? Year?

Do they accept unsolicited manuscripts?

If they don't accept unsolicited manuscripts, here is your loophole:

You don't have an agent? You're not getting in that way.

Conferences are your loop hole!

If Writers' Market says a house does NOT accept unsolicited ms, why are they at a conference?

They are looking for ms.

They won't waste their time going to conf if they're not looking for new material, new writers.

Register for our 7/23/11 conference for 2 pitch opportunities #sgf #mo #amwriting http://ow.ly/4lZmp

Avalon Editor Lia Brown and Lit Agent Louise Fury will take pitches at our 7/23 conf http://ow.ly/4lZmp

Take advantage of conferences where editors/agents are accepting pitch sessions!!!

Conf can be expensive - tuition, travel, hotel, etc.

Choose conferences where you can get more bang for your buck.

Writer's Digest lists upcoming conferences.

Writers' associations list conferences in their genres.

Research conferences and find out where agents/editors will accept pitches.

Invest your money well in conferences with editors/agents accepting pitches.

Ozarks Romance Authors has 2 TOP NAME people coming to 7/23/11 conf, accepting pitches.

If you don't even know house's word count, how do you know your ms is right for them?

Guidelines are usually online. Do your research before pitch session.

Know the publishing house, know the editor/agent. Know what she's looking for.

If they're looking for contemporary romance, do you pitch sci-fi fantasy? NO!

Many editors/agents now have blogs and discuss what they're looking for. Do your research.

See what they are looking for. Look at their web sites.

eHarlequin.com often has free reads online. This is what's selling, so it's what they're looking for.

Don't let someone tell you no one is reading what you're writing.

Don't let someone tell you genre is dead.

Write what's in your heart, what you want to write.

Genres come in and out of style. It might come back if it's "out" now.

A year ago, you didn't see the word "steampunk" everywhere, but now it's hot.

A year ago, people were writing steampunk so they rode along and it's popular now.

10 steps to having a great pitch session...

4. Know the editor or agent

Editors/agents often have certain time period they're interested in.

Read their blogs.

Editors/agents often say on Twitter or Facebook if they're looking for certain things.

Follow them on FB and Twitter!

Are there authors who write in a way that's similar to yours?

You're not copying, of course. But similar genre, style, etc.

Are you more of a sweet romance? Women's fiction? Mainstream?

Is your writing style edgy? Are you the next Tom Clancy? What's your flavor?

Editor/agent hasn't read your stuff yet, but if you say...

"I write in a style similar to ____"

or "My story is a cross between ___ and ____"

... this helps editor/agent know more about your writing.

Can you find out something personal about the editor/agent?

Example: If editor/agent is a new mom and your story focuses on kids,

bring that up in the pitch session.

It's not all about your book. It's about the whole package.

Authors often mention their agent or editor. It takes detective work sometimes to discover.

Find out agent/editor of authors you like, authors who you are similar to.

Do research. Has editor/agent recently lost authors? Might be looking for new ones.

Some publishing houses won't work with certain agents.

Send email if you're curious. Ask agent if they work with specific houses the most.

You've done your homework, know everything about agent/editor you're pitching to.

Book is finished, flawless, and you've written blurb.

Now what? Take your blurb/pitch, stand in front of mirror, watch yourself deliver pitch.

Look at your reflexion. Make eye contact with yourself.

Look confident. First few times, you'll be wobbly. This is silly!

Get it out NOW, in front of mirror, and you'll feel confident at pitch session.

If you have a critique group (like Ozarks Romance Authors), pitch to each other.

You'll be more comfortable pitching to someone you know.

They'll see things you need to change. Stop fidgeting, etc.

They'll notice things that you do not notice.

Once you have the book finished, everything else is easy.

Business cards -- Vital if you are pitching!

White card with black print is best. No cutesy stuff!

Editor/agent often takes home hundreds of biz cards at a conference.

Graphics are OK, but not too busy or cutesy.

Use the back of biz card if you are pitching.

Set aside biz cards for pitch session and include on the back:

Title, target market, theme, word count

Don't put this on all of your biz cards for general networking. Only for pitch sessions.

This info will help you stand out and remind editor/agent about you.

Little things like this help you stand out immediately after appointment

Helps when you submit, too. Same info will be carried across.

Oops! Sorry! I lost track of which number we were on.

8. Dress appropriately

Business attire is best. Make a good impression.

If you want to dress casually for rest of conference, fine. Just change before pitch.

Women: Dress, skirt, pants, whatever. As long as you look polished.

A short heel is best, but do not wear flip-flops!

Men: Nice dress pants, business casual, possibly blazer.

Don't go into pitch dressed in a gimmicky way to promote your book!

Don't go into pitch dressed like Laura Ingalls Wilder!

This is not professional and it distracts from your goal.

Avoid cologne, perfume, jewelry that will distract.

The last thing you want is to attack editor/agent who has allergies.

Don't want her to spend your entire pitch sneezing at your cologne.

Dangly jewelry can be a distraction.

Kelly says she sees so many people go into pitches popping gum.

Sure, you just had lunch and you're worried about breath.

Use a mint instead of popping gum!

Neat, clean, and tidy is the key.

You're not out to impress with fashion sense. You're a confident business person.

9. Be on time!

Get there about 10-15 minutes early.

Yes, you will end up sitting there waiting. That's fine.

This can work to your advantage. If someone gets too nervous and drops out, you might go early.

You might end up with 2 time slots if person in front of you drops out.

10. Be confident!

You're there. You're prepared. You're confident. You're ready.

How do you feel? Are you getting nervous? Think you can't handle it?

Stop and ask yourself "What if?"

What if you don't go through with pitch session?

Don't let this end with you giving up without a fighting chance.

5 years from now, do you want to say "If only I hadn't chickened out"?

You'll look at friends' books on the shelves and wish you had followed through.

Be confident! You've come this far! Writing the book was the hard part.

Being early is also good in case you can hear other pitches.

Listen and get an idea of questions asked, editor/agent personality, etc.

When you arrive for pitch, extend your hand and introduce yourself.

Basic etiquette is rare these days.

Introducing yourself shows you are confident and you're a serious business person.

Agent/editor often have questions/comments to help break the ice.

These questions help separate you-the-person from you-the-writer.

Then you give her the pitch you have rehearsed so well.

Let your passion for the story take over. That passion is what you want editor/agent to hear.

If you talk about book in monotone voice, it says you have no interest in story.

Don't have to bounce in chair and be all excited. Just let natural flavor of story come through.

Editor/agent will recognize you're at the end. Now you ask if she has questions.

Don't let her questions scare you. They serve a purpose.

She's trying to see if her house has a place for your story.

She might be thinking "We've been thinking about doing a line of ___" and you fit.

Answer her questions with utmost confidence. You know the answers. Don't get flustered.

If you can't tell her about your characters, who can?

She may even ask more questions to dig deeper. Be prepared.

When meeting is over, extend hand, thank editor/agent BY NAME for their time.

Remember biz card you wrote info on? Give editor/agent this biz card!

If she asks for first 3 chapters and synopsis, be ready to send it as soon as you get home.

Did she ask for hard copy or email? Send what editor/agent asks for.

Do not take your entire manuscript to the conference and expect editor/agent to take it!!!

While you are fresh in editor/agent's mind, send whatever she asks for.

When you leave pitch, take a minute to step aside and make notes about meeting.

Jot down whatever editor/agent said that will help your pitch stand out.

Did she suggest certain things? Make a note on back of another biz card along with editor/agent name.

Attach that biz card to ms if you snail mail it.

Or if you email it, mention this info in body of email.

Example: "We spoke at the ORA conference in Springfield. You suggested..."

Some editors/agents give you 3 keywords to include in cover letter w/partial.

This helps cut down on unsolicited ms. If you don't use 3 keywords, they pitch.

If editor/agent says not interested, ask what they ARE looking for.

Ask what they would like to receive.

Anything you come out of pitch session with makes you a winner.

Even if they don't ask for ms or partial, you have grown!

What if your manuscript isn't finished? Should you pitch?

Absolutely! Very rare to get this type of opportunity.

Ask professionals ins and outs that you want to clarify.

Ask about the business in general.

Sure, you could email questions but might not ever hear from editor/agent.

This pitch session can be a huge foot in the door!

Google "Predators and Editor" -- great resource!

Thanks for joining us today via live-tweet!

ORA's next meeting is Sat, July 2, 2011. http://ow.ly/5byNH

Follow us @OzarksRomance & http://www.facebook.com/ozarksromanceauthors for July details.

Reminder: Register for our annual conference by July 1 for discount. http://ow.ly/4lZmp

Attendees can pitch to Lit Agent Louise Fury & Avalon Editor Lia Brown! http://ow.ly/4lZmp

Have you registered to attend our annual conference in Springfield, Missouri, on July 23, 2011?

Once you register, you'll be able to schedule your one-on-one pitch session. Opportunities like this DO NOT come along often in the midwest. A pitch session can be one of the best ways to get your foot in the door and establish a relationship with your future editor or agent. Take advantage of this amazing opportunity now by registering for our conference by clicking here.

Join us June 4, 2011, for "Editor/Agent Pitch Session: How to Make it a Success!"

Join us Saturday, June 4, 2011, as our guest speaker presents "The Editor/ Agent Pitch Session: How to Make it a Success!" This information is especially hot right now because those attending our July 23, 2011, annual conference have the chance to pitch to Lia Brown (editor with Avalon Books) and Louise Fury (literary agent with the L. Perkins Agency).

You have a scheduled appointment with the editor or agent of your dreams. Now you’re petrified you’ll never make it through the interview. What do you need to do to prepare?

Guest speaker Kelly Henkins (who writes as Angela Drake) will walk us through ten tried and true tips to overcome anxiety, breeze through that all-important five minutes, and walk away a success.

Kelly Henkins began actively pursuing a writing career twenty years ago. Since then, she has won many awards for short pieces, partials and poetry and published in art magazines.

Kelly is member of Ozarks Creative Writers, Mid-South Writers' Group, Sleuths Ink, and Ozarks Romance Authors.

For eight years, she hosted a weekly workshop on AOL. She continues to moderate a Yahoo Group extension of that workshop, The Writers' Zone, and is owner of the World Romance Writers and World Romance Readers loops.

When not writing, she speaks at conferences and enjoys time with her granddaughter, gardening, journaling, and a myriad of artistic pursuits. Her husband and best friend of twenty-seven years, Bob, supports her many avenues of creativity.

Visit her online at: http://angeladrake.blogspot.com

Ozarks Romance Authors, a non-profit group for writers of all genres, was founded in 1987. The regional writers' group holds its meetings the first Saturday of each month at The Library Station, 2535 N. Kansas Expressway, in Springfield, Missouri.

Join us for critique group at 10:00 a.m., lunch at noon, and our meeting/guest speaker at 1:00 p.m.

Visitors are welcome. Your first three visits are free.

Our annual conference will be held July 23, 2011, at The Clarion Hotel and Conference Center. To learn more about the amazing lineup of speakers and workshops, click here to visit our conference page.

If you have questions about the group, please email us at OzarksRomanceAuthors@gmail.com.

NOTE: When the first Saturday of the month falls on a holiday weekend, we often reschedule. If you’re thinking of visiting and it’s a holiday weekend, please email us to find out if we have rescheduled.

Live Tweet from May 7, 2011, Meeting - Mia Marlow on Story Structure

When Ozarks Romance Authors meets on the first Saturday of each month, sometimes we have the opportunity for one of our members to "live tweet" during our guest speaker's presentation. If you follow us on Twitter (@OzarksRomance) you will see our live tweet take place at approximately 1:05 p.m. Central Standard Time.

At our May 7, 2011, meeting, one of our members traveled back home to the Ozarks from the Boston, Massachusetts, area to visit with family and speak to our writers' group. That member was Diana Groe, who wrote as Emily Bryan in the past and currently writes for Kensington as Mia Marlowe.

To learn more about this fabulous author, visit her web site, www.MiaMarlowe.com or her author's page on the official Kensington web site, http://www.kensingtonbooks.com/catalog.cfm?dest=dir&linkid=2836&linkon=subsection

The live tweet is on our Twitter page, but it's probably buried by now. We've had several requests to share the information, so we are posting the entire live tweet below.

It really helps if you stand on the shoulders of others. Don't have to go it alone.

Enter every contest that you can afford. If you have something worth taking a look at, enter.

Contests = excellent feedback from target readers and work in front of eyes of agents.

If you're in RWA and you win, place or show in RWA contests, your name is in RWA mag for industry insiders to see.

Publishing is such a subjective business. It's important to give them a reason to say no to you.

Win, place or show in contest = someone likes you, so industry insiders more likely to take a chance.

Diana wrote 2 complete manuscripts before 3rd one sold.

If you're working on 1st manuscript, this is your "training wheels" manuscript.

However, there ARE some people who DO sell their first book.

First novel pub in 2006 under her own name, Diana Groe.

Distracting the Duchess was so different than 1st book that she needed pen name, Emily Bryan.

Kensington liked her but wanted a NEW pen name, Mia Marlowe.

Must be flexible in this businsess, even if changing pen names.

We continue to learn, even once we are published. Continue to learn and grow.

Some writers are plotters. Some are pantsters. Some use Snowflake Method. Many methods. Use what works for YOU.

Christopher Vogler's Hero's Journey

Archetypes are characters that tend to reappear (not stereotypes).

Hero or Heroine = most important character of all. Comes from Greek "to protect and to serve."

Why is hero/heroine memorable? They live large. They are the person we'd like to be.

We want to at least try their life on for a while.

Primary psychological function of hero/heroine is letting reader slip into their shoes.

Character Arc = They must be different for having made the journey through the story.

Hero is the one who acts, not who is acted upon. They need to be the prime mover.

If hero or heroine practices self-sacrifices, it REALLY pulls in the reader. Motivated by someone else's danger.

Hero/heroine is how reader learns how this person deals with death (metaphorical or real). Death of dream, business, marriage, etc.

We read to know that we are not alone. We want to find out how others have dealt with loss because everyone goes through this.

Diana was so in love with her first heroine, but readers hated her. She was too perfect. Heroine needs to be flawed in some way.

"Monk" is a good example of flawed hero, and we are pulling for him all the way.

Another mask for hero/heroine or another character = mentor

Mentor represents call to our higher selves.

Mentors = editor in Romancing the Stone, Obiwan, Gandolph, Fairy Godmother

Fallen Mentor = used to be a hero, but has tumbled from pedestal

A League of Their Own = Tom Hanks is fallen mentor (former star player)

Sometimes mentor is inner mentor for hero/heroine = code of ethics, faith, Star Trek's Prime Directive

Mentor may morph into Threshold Guardian

Anything that keeps their forward progress down. Could be positive, negative, or neutral.

In some cases, value of having Threshold Guardian is showing potential danger in story.

Hero/heroine must be smart. Won't plunge into danger without any thought. Threshold Guardian can help with this.

Threshold Guardian might test to see if hero/heroine is worthy.

Threshold Guardian = neurosis

We want hero/heroine to earn everything they get. Threshold Guardian might help H/H be ready to face vill

Herald = another character. Signifies change is coming. Starts things in motion.

Herald could be force of nature, like tornado in Wizard of Oz.

Herald in Romancing the Stone = phone call to Joan Wilder that set story into motion.

Shape Shifter character = Might project what characters WANTS to see. Someone who changes abruptly.

Shape Shifter = Loyalty always in doubt. H/h wonders if this person will betray him/her.

Very last knot you want to untie in your story is relationship. Work it through to very end.

Hero might possibly be Shape Shifter. Example = Thomas Crown in The Thomas Crown Affair.

It has been said that your story is only as strong as your villain.

Shadow Character = psychosis

Sometimes it's the issues that keep the H/h apart. This is where shadow character is internalized.

Provide Hero with worthy opponent, whether internal or external.

Vigo Mortensen in GI Jane = Threshold Guardian / Shadow Character.

Make sure your villain isn't a cardboard character.

Every villain is the hero in his own story. Villain also needs something good, whether they love their children, nice to mother, something.

If but for a few bad choices, this person (villain) could have been so different.

You might want to redeem your villain.

Trickster = Character spreads mayhem. Good for sidekicks and also heroes. Bugs Bunny and other rabbit heroes across the globe.

Trickster can be catalyst for change.

Any character, at any time, can wear one of these masks.

The most satisfying stories have elements of Hero's Journey. Once you know them, will recognize in books and movies.

Orinary world

The title you choose sets the stage for your book. Give people an idea of what kind of a story they'll get.

Title is your first hook for the reader. Make it a good one.

Once you sell, your editor may or may not change title. But a dynamite title can help you sell.

Red Pencil Thursdays on http://www.miamarlowe.com blog. Looking for volunteers again. Email her through site.

Need 500 words of ms for Red Pencil Thursdays. She'll critique, send back to you, and then post on blog.

1st sentence of novel must surprise and delight. Grab them and don't let go.

Do not start first page of your novel with the weather (unless character is a meteorologist).

1st sentence is a promise to your reader that the story will move forward.

Avoid a backstory-dump! Don't spill your guts about the character. Tease the reader with info.

Foreshadowing is vital in the beginning of your story. Seeds of everything that's going to happen.

Hint at both the inner and outer conflicts in the beginning. Story must have both inner and outer conflicts.

Introduce H/h in unique way that draws in the reader. Something that will stick with reader.

Excellent example of introducing character is Carolina Moon by Nora Roberts -- "She woke in the body of a dead friend."

In the beginning, show what your character lacks. Something must change.

Sleepless in Seattle = Tom Hanks is burying wife and says it doesn't happen twice. All we need to know. Unhappy and we're pulling for him already.

For a good story, must also have call to adventure. Invite H/h to face the unknown.

Inciting incident = loss of loved one, temptation, something that stires restlessness, disorientation, discomfort.

Donald Maase says something must happen within first 5 pages to turn H/h's life on end.

Another vital part of story = refusal of the call

Why refuse the call to adventure? Why say no? Creates tension. Shows intelligence. Adventures are messy things.

The stronger the refusal, the more satisfying it will be when H/h jumps into it, finds out they are made for each other, etc.

Put a secret door into your story. Whatever you do, don't do ____. You know, at some point, they will face this.

Good idea to give H/h a wingman or wingwoman so they have someone to talk to.

Even with mentor, at some point, H/h must stand on his/her own. This is why mentors die. Obiwan, Dumbledore...

Threshold for adventure = usually toward end of chapter 3.

At this point, there is no returning to life as they know it.

Next portion of story = Tests, Allies, and Enemies. H/h will probably fail at first. Otherwise, the story would be over.

Approach to the Inmost Cave = Greatest challenge on journey. H/h must face his/her most daunting fear.

If your Approach to Inmost Cave is strong, your story won't have the dreaded "sagging middle."

Reward = After faced fear and moved foward, H/h get the reward. Could be true love, realization of goal, finding treasure.

Transformation & Revelation = Ritual death as hero overcomes greatest foe. Black moment.

Best if characters get into trouble because of something they've done. Because of their own choices.

Each action bridges on what comes before. Everything builds. Stakes are raised with each scene.

Black moment: Donald Maase says no matter how bad it is, make it WORSE!

The Return = Ready to go back to everyday life stronger, filled with purpose and deeper understanding.

Not all stories use all stages of the journey, but the most satisfying tales have several of these hot buttons.

Thanks for joining us for live-tweet of novelist http://www.miamarlowe.com speaking to Ozarks Romance Authors! #sgf

12 for critique group and 18 for meeting, which is great for a holiday weekend (Mother's Day)!

May 7, 2011 - Mia Marlow

Novelist Mia Marlowe is scheduled to present "What a Novel Idea!" at our May 7, 2011, meeting. This topic will teach us about something vital -- story structure.

How can a writer be sure her story isn’t full of holes or missed opportunities? Listen to the voices of the ancient bards. For centuries, story-tellers have been perfecting the craft of weaving tales. We can stand on their shoulders.

Based on Christopher Vogler’s The Writer’s Journey, Mia explains the mythic structures that form plot points your readers are already pre-programmed to respond to. WHAT A NOVEL IDEA will help writers be certain their plots will hit all the readers’ (and editors’) hot-buttons.

Following her presentation at our meeting, she will be signing books at Half Price Books of the Ozarks, a fabulous book store in the Plaza Shopping Center, 1950 S. Glenstone, Suite O. We will be there from 3:00 - 5:00 p.m., so stop by and say hello.

We're so excited for the talented Diana Groe (who writes as Emily Bryan and Mia Marlowe) to return to the Ozarks! She is a native of West Plains, but is now based near Boston, Massachusetts.

Mia learned much of what she knows about storytelling from singing. A classically trained soprano, she won the District Metropolitan Opera Auditions and has shared a stage with Placido Domingo. As she prepared for operatic roles, she devised back stories for her characters. Since she’s worn a real corset, and had to sing high C’s in one, she empathizes with the trials of her fictional heroines. But in Mia’s stories, they don’t die in a Parisian garret. They get to live and keep the hero!

Now an award-winning author, she writes historical romance for multiple publishing houses. Her debut title received advance ovations from romance luminaries. #1 New York Times bestseller Victoria Alexander says Mia’s Touch of a Thief has "adventure and heat and everything I want in a great story!" UK’s BooksMonthly has crowned Mia Marlowe “the queen of saucy historical romance.”

You can visit her at any of the following places: Facebook, Twitter, or her website.

Ozarks Romance Authors, a non-profit group for writers of all genres founded in 1987, holds its meetings the first Saturday of each month at The Library Station, 2535 N. Kansas Expressway, in Springfield, Missouri.

Join us for critique group at 10:00 a.m., lunch at noon, and our meeting/guest speaker at 1:00 p.m.

Visitors are welcome. Your first three visits are free.

Our annual conference will be held July 23, 2011, at The Clarion Hotel and Conference Center. To learn more about the amazing lineup of speakers and workshops, visit our conference page.

If you have questions about the group, please email us at OzarksRomanceAuthors@gmail.com.

NOTE: When the first Saturday of the month falls on a holiday weekend, we often reschedule. If you’re thinking of visiting and it’s a holiday weekend, please email us to find out if we have rescheduled.

April 2, 2011 - Jean Stringam

Dr. Jean Stringam’s novels The Hoarders and Balance are the first of four novels in a series that explores how the events of one year impact the lives of an extended family of cousins. While the protagonists are involved in many events singular to their own lives, the major family events are seen by different eyes as having different values, even different meanings. A reader will discover that some narrators turn out to be fairly unreliable while others are searingly accurate, but each earnestly believes the small slice of reality that s/he is able to understand is the total view of the matter. The stories are anchored in contemporary culture and investigate ways the current generation of teens respond to being raised by their Gen-Me parents and Boomer grandparents. While the impact of extended family is central, other values of North American culture are also explored: from sex to cell phones, from non-communication and cyber-bullying to constant texting and dissembling affection, from cruel acts to the sublimity of genuine love. Readers young and old report being captivated by the drama of a family who, in the muddle of living, still manage to find and give their love. Jean Stringam grew up in Alberta, Canada, taking three of her five degrees there, and remembers wonderful days riding horses, back-packing, and skiing with her family in the Canadian Rockies. Now that she lives far away from her five children and five sisters, located on both sides of the 49th parallel, she spends a lot of time travelling to see them. When they get together they love to make music, attend live theatre, and hear each other’s tales.

Nowadays she’s either teaching for her university in Missouri or, better yet, she’s teaching for them in a foreign country such as China or England. She loves to travel. If she had her way, she would visit every country in the world including all the oceans, rivers, forests, and jungles. Whenever anyone asks her where home is, she thinks about all the people she has loved. If she could get them all together in one wonderful, happy pile, that would be home. You can visit her at http://jeanstringamauthor.wordpress.com/

Please also note that we will not be meeting in our regular room this time. Join us in the Story Room at the Library Station at the usual times.

Ozarks Romance Authors, a non-profit group for writers of all genres founded in 1987, holds its meetings the first Saturday of each month at The Library Station, 2535 N. Kansas Expressway, in Springfield, Missouri. Join us for critique group at 10:00 a.m., lunch at noon, and our meeting/guest speaker at 1:00 p.m. Visitors are welcome. Your first three visits are free. If you have questions about the group, please email us at OzarksRomanceAuthors@gmail.com. NOTE: When the first Saturday of the month falls on a holiday weekend, we often reschedule. If you’re thinking of visiting and it’s a holiday weekend, please email us to find out if we have rescheduled.

March 5, 2011 - Ruth Hunter-Gault and Jill Slack

Jill Slack and Ruth Hunter of Ozarks Romance Authors will speak on social media and blogging for writers.Join Ozarks Romance Authors' members Ruth Hunter-Gault and Jill Slack as they present ways to promote your writing through social networks and media at the March 5, 2011, meeting of this group for writers.

Ozarks Romance Authors, a non-profit group for writers of all genres founded in 1987, holds its meetings the first Saturday of each month at The Library Station, 2535 N. Kansas Expressway, in Springfield, Missouri. Join us for critique group at 10:00 a.m., lunch at noon, and our meeting/guest speaker at 1:00 p.m.

Visitors are welcome. Your first three visits are free.

For more information, be sure to click the icons (on the right side of the page) to follow us on Facebook and Twitter. If you have questions about the group, please email us at OzarksRomanceAuthors@gmail.com or call (417) 597-4716.

February 5, 2011: Amanda Barke on Supplementing Income Through Journalistic Writing

Based in the rural Ozarks, Amanda J. Barke is a freelance journalist, author, editor, singer, and songwriter. She splits her time between writing Christian romance novels and children’s picture books, editing newsletters, and writing articles for five regional publications, including Missouri Life Magazine, The Ozarks Mountaineer Magazine, and Ozarks Senior Living Magazine.

Her work can also be seen online at ehow.com, livestrong.com/lifestyle, and amykitchenerfdn.org.

When she is not writing, she enjoys traveling with her family’s Bluegrass/Gospel band, The Clarke St. Strings.

For more information on Amanda’s many projects, visit her online at: http://www.AmandaBarke.com. From "A Distant Rumble" by Amanda J. Barke:

When an underground cave in Kauai collapses, Dezarae Collins, a young archaeologist, is trapped beneath the surface and fights for her life. From above ground her Hawaiian assistant, Derek Makoa, and hundreds of volunteers frantically search for her. Dezarae’s widowed mother, Sydney, wonders why God would allow such a tragedy. Hope wanes as the search continues well into the third day.

Meanwhile, Dezarae struggles to maintain consciousness with a life-threatening head injury. Desperate to stay awake, Dezarae finds the missing journals of the late, great cave explorer, Elizabeth Rochester. The historical documents relate Elizabeth’s discovery of a missing English cruise liner rumored to have carried half of the Queen’s fortune.

Will Dezarae survive her injury? Will Derek ever confess his love for her? What happened to the treasure? Why would God allow such tragedy? Could God really have a plan in all of this chaos?

LIVE-TWEET TRANSCRIPT: Allan Young's Presentation on Travel Writing

Allan Cannon YoungAllan Young spoke to Ozarks Romance Authors Saturday, June 5, 2010, on the field of travel writing. We live-tweeted as fast as we could and managed to keep up rather well, sharing his information with the Twitterverse. If you would like to see our future live-tweets during our meetings, which are held in Springfield, Missouri, on the first Saturday of each month, follow us on Twitter HERE.

Here is a transcript of the live-tweet.

Our speaker today is Allan Young. He has written for travel industry for 40yr and taught at Ozarks Technical Community College for 14 yrs.

OTC’s summer/fall schedules include Young’s courses Travel Writing; 6 Other Ways to Get Your Book Published; and…

How To Get That Job, Keep It & Get Promoted

Allan doesn’t tell people how to write or what to write. He helps them get published.

His 96th book was just published.

Of all the writing he’s done, travel writing has been the most exciting/lucrative of all genres.

Allan Young’s first magazine article published at age 11.

He was a mechanical engineer, which led to becoming a published author in that field. Led to writing college textbooks.

He is 82 years old and has been married to same woman since they were both 20.

Allan traveled a lot as editor of engineering magazine.

While on biz trip to Japan, saw a sexy dress in a window. That’s what led to him becoming travel writer.

Bought that sexy blue dress for his wife (showed us a photo of wife in photo). Oooh la la!

On flight home, thought about experience buying dress. Dress sizes are not the same in Japan!

Wondered what you need to know when traveling to Japan for the first time.

Wrote article on foreign clothing sizes for travelers. Was pub in 3 magazines immediately.

There is a hungry market for useful info for travelers.

Not just travel magazines pub travel articles. All types of publications look for them.

Allan Young is teaching a course about travel writing this summer at Ozarks Tech Comm College -- http://www.otc.edu

What is travel writing? Write about…

People, places, things, events so someone who will never go there can visualize.

Travel writing should encourage ppl to visit these places for their own enjoyment.

Educate those who will never go there and encourage those who will go there.

All of the $ Allan earns from writers, speaking, selling books, goes to charities including Susan G. Komen Breast Cancer (wife is survivor).

Reasons to become travel writer?

Money is good. Benefits are good (lots of tax deductions).

Everything that you do as a travel writer becomes a biz expense.

Go visit your kids and there are lots of things to write about along the way.

Can even get admission free. Contact places in advance to see about free passes.

People welcome you when they know you are writing about their destination.

Doesn’t call himself freelance writer. Prefers contributing editor to variety of magazines.

Get biz cards. Give them to people. Allan has 12 different biz cards.

You don’t have to travel to be a travel writer.

Most events have a press room. Ask where it is when you are at events.

Allan creates a badge to wear w/biz card & empty convention badge holder. Wears it while out at events/places he’s writing about.

Dress the part. If writing about golf, he dresses like a golfer. Makes you look legit.

Opportunities will come to you once ppl know you are a travel writer.

Allan wrote about golf, suddenly got invitations to play for free on many golf courses.

Most people he contacts re: coming to write about them, he sends letter via US mail.

He has seen every show in Branson more than 1x and never paid a dime. Same in Myrtle Beach.

Let people in charge know you are coming, you’re a travel writer, doing a piece on their biz.

Often will receive free tickets.

Teaches travel writing at OTC 3x per year. Students come from a broad range of backgrounds.

Travel writing can be used to help boost your own biz.

Interviews are important in travel writing. Quote the performers and those who enjoyed the show, for example.

Putting the article together – use the WHEN/BUT approach. “When I…, but…”

“When the American Legion decided to build a new__ it was __, but they were to soon learn…”

You’ve written the article. Now what? Where to sell it?

Study the market. Use Writer’s Market and other resources, of course. Available at library. Hundreds of publications devoted to travel. .

Look beyond the magazines on your coffee table.

Many companies publish their own magazines. Airline magazines publish travel articles.

Don’t forget trade magazines and Internet publications.

When submitting to publishers (selling your work), refer to yourself as writer.

When soliciting for info at places U want to write about, refer to yourself as editor.

There are many aspects to write about in travel writing.

Places to visit, history of those places, seasonal jobs in tourist areas, clothes, food…

things for kids to do, things for young families to do, things for seniors to do, events, fairs,

motorcycles, antique cars…

trains, transportation, farm machinery, boats, lakes, Amish communities…

If taking photos of individuals, if it is far enough away that you can’t recognize them, he says you don’t need a signed release.

1 thing Allan encourages us NOT to do – don’t write about yourself doing this or that. Let the reader experience the trip through your writing.

Of his 96 books, he has recycled 10% of them. Can also recycle with travel articles.

Visit a canyon. Write about a different aspect of that visit each time and it becomes more than 1 article for more than 1 pub.

Much of his travel writing has been result of needing to go somewhere already. What will you see along the way?

Don’t write the same old crap everyone else writes. Put a new twist on the same destination or topic.

Do not embed photos into your Word doc. Do not try to lay out the story.

Just send the story as Word doc and photos as jpg. They will layout the story.

If you embed photos into Word doc, they likely can’t be used. Need to be jpg files.

Allan Young’s latest book is “How To Get That Job, Keep It and Get Promoted.” He also wrote the book, “Writing For Magazines: How-To Articles, Travel Writing and Short Stories” He has a CD for $20 that includes curriculum for the 8 courses he teaches at Ozarks Technical Community College.

You can take a series of articles and turn them into books.

You can take a book and turn it into a series of articles.

He also writes with pen names. Doesn’t care what name is on the book as long as he gets a check!

To contact Allan or order his books, write to him at:

CANNON PUBLISHING COMPANY 3428 West Highland Place Springfield, MO 65807

Or find him on Facebook at: https://www.facebook.com/100001619838292#!/profile.php?id=100001619838292

Some of Allan's titles include: "The Coal Digger"

"The Stoneface Legend"

"Me and Jake"

"How to Get That Job, Keep it, and Get Promoted"

"Take the Hard, Dirty Jobs and Turn Them Into Rackets"

"Writers' Universal Stylebook"

"Write Right and Get Published"

"Writing For Magazines: How-To Articles, Travel Writing, Short Stories"

"The Last Cruise of the Cajun Queen"

"Twice-Told Tales" (co-written by Rosemary Young)

"So You Want to Live in a Small Town" (co-written by Rosemary Young)

Ozarks Romance Authors has been a registered non-profit in the state of Missouri since it was founded in 1987. The group has fun and informative meetings the first Saturday of each month at The Library Station on Kansas Expressway in Springfield, Missouri.

Members range from those just thinking about writing a book to award-winning authors.

We are a multi-genre group with members writing all types of fiction, non-fiction, articles, poetry, six-word memoirs, blogs, web sites, and photography.

Visitors are welcome! Your first 3 visits are free. Annual membership is just $25, and our "new year" begins in October (dues, officers, etc.).

If you have questions about our group's meetings, annual conference, or the Weta Nichols Fiction Writing Contest, leave us a comment, email us at OzarksRomanceAuthors@gmail.com, or call (417) 597-4716 to leave us a message.

Travel Writing to be discussed at regional writers' group June 5, 2010

Allan Cannon YoungLocal author/editor/instructor Allan Young will speak to a regional writers’ organization regarding travel writing at 1:00 p.m. on Saturday, June 5, 2010, in the Frisco Room of The Library Station, 2535 N. Kansas Expressway. Young has written for the travel industry for 40 years and has taught at Ozarks Technical Community College for 14 years. The summer and fall schedules at OTC include Young’s courses Travel Writing, Six Other Ways to Get Your Book Published, and How To Get That Job, Keep It, and Get Promoted.

Ozarks Romance Authors is a non-profit organization for writers in the southwest Missouri region. Monthly speakers help writers of all genres hone their skills and explore writing opportunities.

Meetings are held the first Saturday of each month and visitors are welcome.

For more information, visit www.Ozarks-Romance-Authors.com, become our fan on Facebook at www.Facebook.com/OzarksRomanceAuthors, or follow us on Twitter @OzarksRomance.

May 2010 meeting - Diana Botsford on Screenplay Writing and Other Visual Venues

What fabulous talents we have living here in the Ozarks!

Diana Botsford's degrees include Screenwriting & Producing from Boston University, and Master of Arts in Creative Writing from Seton Hill University. Prior to joining Missouri State University's Department of Media, Journalism and Film, she spent 12 years in Los Angeles in the television and film industry, followed by 5 years developing streaming media content and community-driven websites for Microsoft.

Her production credits are available in her IMDB profile by clicking here. Her work includes writing, producing, and directing for a wide variety of series and films. Her screenwriting credits include Star Trek: The Next Generation, Spiral Zone, and a variety of children’s series for CBS, NBC and independent networks. As a visual effects director Botsford has enjoyed the opportunity to play techno junkie while telling people like George Clooney how to stand in front of a bluescreen.

She has produced multiple series for television such as the CBS series Harts of the West and Nightgames. Her theatrical credits include visual effects directing and supervision for a wide variety of films including Nightmare of Elm Street VI, Tank Girl, From Dusk Til Dawn, Terminator 2 and many independent films.

As Associate Producer for D.I.C. Enterprises and then later as VP of Family Programming for Kushner-Locke, she produced over 1,000 hours of animation for shows that included Inspector Gadget, Heathcliff, M*A*S*K Force, Spiral Zone, and the Columbia/Tristar film Pound Puppies & the Legend of Big Paw. Most recently, Botsford served as Executive Producer on the Missouri State University Electronic Arts SF short Apollo which was a recent selection at the Athens, Greece International Science Fiction Film Festival.

Her primary writing focus is on science fiction for a variety of mediums including books, film, television, theatre and comics. In addition to Botsford's Stargate: SG-1 novel The Four Dragons (set for release in June 2010), her recently completed written work includes the SF novel Critical Past and the comic book series The Fracture. Botsford is oftentimes a speaker or workshop leader at various writers conferences and science fiction conventions.

Visit her online at http://www.DianaBotsford.com.

Join us in the Frisco Room at The Library Station in Springfield, MO! Critique group begins at 10:30 Central Time, we break for lunch at Panera next door just in time to beat the noon rush, and we return to the Frisco Room at 1:00 for our guest speaker.

Western author Dusty Richards scheduled to speak at our April 3, 2010 meeting

Dusty Richards is a fabulous author from our region. He will speak to ORA at our April 3, 2010, meeting.

From Dusty’s site:

I speak to the Ozark Romance Writers in Springfield, MO. I will be looking at members first chapters that have been turned down and discussing why. Should be a great day.

http://www.dustyrichards.com/Marketing%20News.htm

Dusty has many credits to his name, including the 2010 Western Heritage Award for a Western Novel from the National Cowboy & Western Heritage Museum, and the 2007 Spur Award from Western Writers of America for Best Western Short Fiction and Best Mass Market Paperback Novel.

His bio from his web site (as of 2010):

If there was a Saturday matinee, Dusty was there with Hoppy, Roy and Gene. He went to roundup at seven years-old, sat on a real horse and watched them brand calves on the Peterson Ranch in Othello, Washington. When his family moved to Arizona from the Midwest, at age 13, he knew he'd gone to heaven. A horse of his own, ranches to work on, rodeos to ride in, Dusty's mother worried all his growing up years he'd turn out to be some "old cowboy bum."

He read every western book on the library shelves. He sat on the stoop of Zane Grey's cabin on Mrs. Winter's ranch and looked out over the "muggie-own" rim and promised the writer's ghost his book would join Grey's some day on the book rack.

Since English teachers never read westerns, he made up book reports like "Guns on the Brazos" by J.P. Jones. The story of a Texas Ranger who saves the town and the girl. Then he sold them for a dollar to other boys to lazy to read when teenagers were lucky to earn fifty cents an hour. In fact, book reports kept him and his buddy in gas money to go back and forth to high school.

After graduating from Arizona State University in 1960, he came to northwest Arkansas, ranched, auctioneered, announced rodeo, worked 32 years for Tyson Foods in management, anchored TV news and struggled to get a book of his own sold. The three earlier books on the list were published without his knowledge and only discovered a year ago as even existing.

In 1992, his first novel, "Noble's Way," was published. In 2003, his novel, "The Natural," won the Oklahoma Writer's Federation Fiction Book of the Year Award. In 2004, "The Abilene Trail" won the same award. Dusty invests a lot of his time helping others who want to learn how to write by speaking at seminars and conferences all over the United States.

There is no difference in writing any kind of fiction. In Dusty's words, "You simply change the sets, costumes and dialect."

He serves on the board of Ozark Creative Writers Conference held annually in Eureka Springs, Arkansas, as well as on the boards of the Ozarks Writers League in Branson, Missouri, and the Oklahoma Writers Federation. He also serves on the board of his local electric co-op, and of the Springdale, Arkansas PRCA rodeo. He is a past board member of the Western Writers of America. In 2004, he was inducted into the Arkansas Writers Hall of Fame.

This year, his 65th book will have been published under his own name and pseudonyms. That does not count his five dozen plus short stories and hundreds of articles and columns.

Dusty and his wife, Pat, reside next to Beaver Lake east of Springdale, Arkansas -- that is, whenever they aren't off at speaking engagements or writing conferences, announcing rodeos or chuckwagon racing, or researching for western novels. He and his wife have two wonderful daughters, Ann and Rhonda, two great sons-in-law, and four super grandkids from ages 12 to 20.

If he can steal time to do it, Dusty likes to fish for trout on the White River in Arkansas.

Teen Author Henry Stratmann III Signs Books At ORA Meeting

16-Year-Old Henry Stratmann III Signs Books at ORA on June 2, 2007Our June 2, 2007, meeting was extra special as we welcomed Henry Stratmann, III, the teenaged son of member Dr. Maryellen Stratmann. Henry signed copies of his book, "Eye Has Not Seen: An Anthology of Short 'Short Stories.'" His book is available online at Starship Press.

Information about Henry and his book, from his web site:

EYE HAS NOT SEEN: AN ANTHOLOGY OF SHORT STORIES by teen journalist Henry Stratmann III, age 16

What do you get when you mix H. G. Wells with Ray Bradbury and O. Henry?

The answer: Henry Stratmann III.

This sixteen-year-old takes you on a memorable journey in his first anthology of short “short stories." With just a few strokes of his pen, he connects you to intriguing characters from the past, present, and future.

Climb on board the roller coaster of his imagination and buckle up for the ride! These are stories that all ages will enjoy.

About the Author: Henry's favorite activity is daydreaming. He began writing down his musings at the ripe old age of six, when he started a family daily newspaper. He is a typical teen-ager and attends high school in Springfield, Missouri.

To order Henry's Anthology of Fiction Fables, send check or money order for $6.99 (sales tax included), plus $2.00 for shipping and handling to:

Fiction Department Starship Press, LLC 4319 South National, No. 135 Springfield, Missouri 65810-2607

Or order through our bookstore on this website using PayPal or your credit card.

Ozarks Romance Authors, a non-profit group for writers of all genres, was founded in 1987. The regional writers’ group holds its meetings the first Saturday of each month at The Library Station, 2535 N. Kansas Expressway, in Springfield, Missouri.

Join us for critique group at 10:00 a.m., lunch at noon, and our meeting/guest speaker at 1:00 p.m.

Visitors are welcome. Your first three visits are free.

Our annual conference will be held July 23, 2011, at The Clarion Hotel and Conference Center. To learn more about the amazing lineup of speakers and workshops, click here to visit our conference page.

If you have questions about the group, please email us at OzarksRomanceAuthors@gmail.com.

NOTE: When the first Saturday of the month falls on a holiday weekend, we often reschedule. If you’re thinking of visiting and it’s a holiday weekend, please email us to find out if we have rescheduled.